Abigail at Random Ramblings of a Teenage Artist asked if I would join in her Monthly Monday Poetry challenge. I used to write quite a bit of poetry, but as I’ve grown older, I’ve gotten wordier. Poetry isn’t supposed to be wordy. But, why not challenge myself to be creative and succinct at the same time?
As I worked through the poem below, I realized I do miss the beauty that can come from a dollop of alliteration and a smattering of adjectives. So, if you are feeling creative (and even if you are not!) consider sitting down and composing your own bit of poetry and adding it to Abigail’s challenge!
Rejoicing and Remembering
I trace the lines of his face and drink in his downy head.
Searching for familiarity, I gaze long and deep.
With arms full again, he is a balm to my ache,
Always himself, forever a reminder.
A gift of beginnings bundled in blue flannel,
Tightly, we are woven in a dance of dependency.
Love swells as tears come full circle
My heart holds her memory, my hands hold him.
Amy Roberts 2009
Lynnette Kraft says
The emotions of having a new baby after having one leave are interesting, aren’t they? There’s a deep love and appreciation for the new life that you hold and there are many thoughts and rememberances of the life that you only hold in your heart.Thanks for sharing your heart Amy.Love,Lynnette
Kristin says
That was beautiful. I felt that I could feel your emotions by the way that you described them. I love the line “woven in a dance of dependency”.
Abigail Kraft says
Wow…this touched my heart in so many ways. Your emotions are so beautifully executed in your writing! Thank you for sharing these intimate and beautiful reflections of your heart. In His arms,–Abigail
Kyle Kraft says
Put a lump in my throat, yet stimulated joy, peace, love and hope! Thank you for sharing.
Betsy Markman says
Wow, that was powerful indeed. You wrapped a lot into just a few words. Beautiful.
Jared Kraft says
Poignant and beautiful. Wonderfully written and humbly introspective! Thank you so much for sharing,Jared
Oksana says
Wow.. I found your poem through the Monthly Monday challenge, and I just wanted to thank you for sharing your feelings with us. You expressed your thoughts so beautifully — not just the sorrow of losing a child, but also the hope and peace that comes through Christ. It’s amazing how God can use the gift of a new life to carry you through the sorrow of losing Emily, and it was so touching to read about the connections that you make between them. Thank you for being so open about this.Love,Oksana
Linda says
Amy, because I know your story this poem brought tears to my eyes. I remember not too long ago the sorrow you were going through. I know it is a sorrow that lingers,…but the new joy that fills your arms is such a blessing and a gift as well.Our Lord has called you to be His vessel and you are doing just that.Thank you for sharing your heart felt poetry today.In His Love,Linda HogelandLynnette Kraft’s Mom
Lilyofthevalley - Tanya says
Simply beautiful!
Anonymous says
You gave me shivers, Amy. What a beautiful outpouring of love for the beautiful baby you hold and for your beloved Emily! With hugs and prayers, Kim F (Stafford KS)